Shelby Jasmin Estrada

The Long Walk Home

Walking in the hot sun
Feet aching
Legs and back throbbing
Smelling gasoline zoom by
Hearing tires screech
Listening for a crow to caw
Feeling a breeze rush by
My lips taste like sweat
As I walk the road home
I see the sun slowly fade

Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 28, 2010

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  • Apothecary Montague (3/1/2010 12:36:00 AM)

    very nice and nicely penned, you capture the feeling beautifully.

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