Dark Sands Poem by Shelby Jasmin Estrada

Dark Sands

Rating: 3.0


Dark sand running through my fingers
Like water dripping from the leaves of a palm tree
Smooth and rushing
This dark sand
Like the stars in the sky
Shining with every movement
The dark sands of a beach far away
Rushing in the oceans waters

Monday, April 6, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: beach,dark,leaves,oceans,running
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sameer Ahmed 07 June 2009

The imagery portrayed is just splendid that depicts the melancholic and alarming feeling of frightfulness of losing something........a beautiful poem....10

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Deva De Silva 16 April 2009

Sandy beaches... plam trees... ocean waves... lovely imagery. In few words so much expressed!

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