Dark Sands Poem by Shelby Jasmin Estrada

Dark Sands

Rating: 3.0


Dark sand running through my fingers
Like water dripping from the leaves of a palm tree
Smooth and rushing
This dark sand
Like the stars in the sky
Shining with every movement
The dark sands of a beach far away
Rushing in the oceans waters

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sameer Ahmed 07 June 2009

The imagery portrayed is just splendid that depicts the melancholic and alarming feeling of frightfulness of losing something........a beautiful poem....10

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Deva De Silva 16 April 2009

Sandy beaches... plam trees... ocean waves... lovely imagery. In few words so much expressed!

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