The Lost Child Poem by ben siemsen
The Lost Child
nowhere to go the little girl
was trying to find her mother
but there was no success
of finding her at all coz the lost
child had to be adopted
as an orphanage to a couple
who was willing to take
care of the orphanage
who had lost her parents
Sunday, May 4, 2008
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5/9/2024 8:57:50 AM # 1.0.0.1119
ben, Nice poem but I do have a critique. In your line, 'as an orphanage to a couple' the word is orphan. The child is an orphan. An orphanage is the housing or place where the child is sent to by the state. So the line should read: 'as an orphan to a couple' and also in the following line: ''care of the orphan' who had lost her parents. Sad story, well expressed. Nice job!