Friday, March 30, 2012

The Lost Dream Comments

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Looking and searching wanting to be astonished,
to minimize the fog on the future of a child left
banished.
Trying to believe what others have doubted,
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Angel Joseph
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Wini Jose 07 April 2012

hello nice poem dont forget to correct the spelling of criticism in line 5

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