Sunday, November 22, 2015

The Love Of A Damaged Soul Comments

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Destruction and corruption have infiltrated my once stable mentality
Insecurities and lust fed upon the purity of my heart
Sin and denial dismembered the soul of whom I cherished the most
The sacrafial love that I once obtained stabilized the demonic past that  ruled my abandoned life
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Souren Mondal 22 November 2015

A well penned poem Izzy.. But don't you think it would be better if you divided it into a proper stanza form a added punctuation marks? ? Thanks for sharing this...

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