The Luggage Wasnt That Expensive Poem by I AM THAT MOUSE

The Luggage Wasnt That Expensive



i dropped my bags at the gates and walked away.
i know he's waiting in the terminal to see my face in the crowd
but i'm not coming.

my luggage held my heart, my pride, and my discontent.
and they will arrive on time...on the red eye to buffalo new york
but i'm not coming.

i can see the expression on his face as he waits for me
i don't see a smile, i don't see wide eyes, i don't see his heart on his sleeve
that's why i'm not coming.

and he can keep my bags.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dee Daffodil 19 June 2006

Very assertive writing in this poem...interesting theme about sending your bags on ahead without you! Tres cool! Dee

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