Friday, January 22, 2010

The Man Being Comments

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We can see throuhg his eyes that he likes you
We can see through his behavior that he really cares about you
We can see through his lips that he want to spend a time with you
But we can't see through his mind if he really loves you
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Vera Firefly
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 22 January 2010

ummm... i think there is a typing error in the first line of the poem.... anyway, the poem is good... you write good!

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