Wednesday, September 28, 2011

The Man Next Door Comments

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My brother asks why I sleep with my knife.
Only because I'm scared for my life.
A mysterious man with a bad past next door.
He's done many crimes and unfortunatly more.
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Connor Jones
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Dave Walker 29 September 2011

like it. nice flow to it. read my poem called innocence lost, then read in chains. hope to see more poems from you,

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