Saturday, August 8, 2015

The Man On The Road Comments

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Just look at the people who live with their family on the road
With not a care in this world as they share each other's load.
You can see the immense joy on the small child's face
Little clothing he has, but still keeping up with the pace.
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PADMINI WILLIAMS
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Pankaj Aggarwal 08 August 2015

A good effort, sharing concern for the homeless who leave the safety of the villages and come to cities chancing their luck. People on the pavement could have been a better Title. A good poem but with scope for improvement.

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