Thursday, August 28, 2014

The Mason's Daughter Comments

Rating: 5.0

'Hello'. She called out, my heart skipped a beat.
For me and many others, her voice was a treat
She teased me with her smile and a voice that haunts
She was aloof and meek, a mystery for the class.
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 28 August 2014

Initially I thought it is like Beggar maid by Lord Tennyson. the love poem later proceeding further turned the them, Hard work and to be something unique in life the enthusiasm makes a man great so the case here //but Question arises why in the form of poem- -this is a message to our dyeing society where we have created a wall on economy based that is not fair..we should never underestimate any body here she is a mason's daughter to Daughter of India Individuality to Mass lovely Zeal that kills the wall goes beyond boundaries 10

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Gajanan Mishra 28 August 2014

very beautiful and heart touching, thanks,

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