Sunday, November 9, 2008

The Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

While moths and caterpillars spin cocoons
Fishes are floating dead in polluted lagoons
Only some dream of flying to the moon
While many dream of becoming a tycoon
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Sylvia Chidi
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Min Sia 09 November 2008

I love the rhymes and it sets with the poem itself! The moon..yes, it is the moon! A 10!

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