Monday, January 23, 2012

The Moon Managed To Erase The Distance Comments

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When I remember your leaving for a far off land
miles stretched for seventeen hours of flight
moon hanging heavily upon my heart;
my tears were as many as the stars;
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Carmela Patterson
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Hans Vr 04 February 2012

I think this is a fantastic, truly wonderful observation. We all enjoy the same sun and moon, making us somehow close together. Great poem, Mel. Very wise

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