Monday, August 6, 2012

The Morning Has Not Yet Come Comments

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The morning has not yet come-
The darkness is still here-
And yet there is peace and quiet
And a space for thought -
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Shalom Freedman
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Søren Valentine 06 August 2012

I really like this poem. It really appeals to me because it's similar to my style of writing (maybe I'm biased haha) but I particularly enjoyed the fact that, at least in my eyes, you don't present the darkness as something negative as many do. It's something peaceful to you, at least from what I gathered from your poem. Really nice!

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