Thursday, January 1, 2004

The New Theory Comments

Rating: 2.9

A butterfly's wing
moving gracefully
in a still Asian dawn
works up a storm
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Louis McKee
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Tim Gavin` 28 November 2004

'The New Theory' is not one of McKee's better efforts. The butterfly effect is an overdrawn metaphor and the woman that the speaker desires leaves the reader grasping at straws. Although the premise of the poem has potential, the poem fails to deliver a strong punch line at the end. However, the setup creates the weakness of the poem since the intitial metaphor has been used by a number of other poets.

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