Monday, May 4, 2009

The Nightingale Sings Comments

Rating: 5.0

As we lay in the grass
The peace descends
The sun shine above
The Heat radiates through our skin
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Rosalita Fern
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Wow! This certainly has an unexpected ending! Well done for a clever twist on the title! I just felt I was there with your nightingale on the grass listening to the lullabye and quite happy to be there forever... Great writing 10/10 Karin Anderson

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