Friday, August 4, 2006

The Olive Trees Are Dying. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The Olive Trees are dying. (not the title, but the first line of poem.)

They used to stand so proudly,
they could make Ares feel at ease,
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Duncan Wyllie 13 August 2006

This comes across so strong in feeling, I am not sure how the Olive trees come into it, but that's poetry, this is without fail a 10 in my book Love duncan X

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