Tuesday, November 24, 2009

The One Across The Way Comments

Rating: 5.0

How do you put words together when you feel like you’ve died?
My eyes are dry, no telling that I’m crying inside
I know how I feel yet the words are trapped behind my tongue
It would seem that this is a road that has continued since I was young
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J.B. Smith
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Ben Burgess 24 November 2009

Excellent poem very well written 10/10

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I'm glad I found this poem. It's absolutly wonderful. I love the way it feels like someone really put their heart out there on display. Your style is very honest and I enjoyed that. Keep it up.

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