Friday, January 6, 2017

The One That Got Away Comments

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He got sweets but it was salty
A blind rage like a fire swept over him
He ran away
But he could not flee
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Hajar Lazim
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Chinedu Dike 06 January 2017

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. An insightful poem elegantly brought forth. Thanks for sharing.

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