Sunday, February 8, 2009

The Pain Comments

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Im in my house yelling dang
while i fill the pain going through my vains
i might die while im going insane
its like my lifes hanging from a string that might fling leaving a ring and a sting of pain amoung me
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Shilesha Johnson 06 March 2009

wow that was very deep. i feel your pain. i could totally relate to how you feel. great poem! !

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~ Jon London ~ 08 February 2009

Very deep and so hard to come to terms with when times get like this. Nice job Jon

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