I sit here with great mental anguish,
Acidic thoughts in my mind languish
my head is a demonic playground
with there claws my senses they pound
come death come I invite thee
in only death can I be truely free
Another great write cody, with your great vocabulary i think you could even expand on this one.... have a look at my poem 'The Beast Within' 1st poem i ever wrote. Think you might find some similarity's Peace
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow, another great poem for it's strikingly dark theme and bleek ending. it is a truly gorgeous idea that one is completely free in death, but also rather sad that one would invite it. again, great great imagery with the demonic play ground and the claws, it really gives the 'mental anguish' life. thanks for posting, Kath