Friday, July 20, 2012

The Painting Comments

Rating: 4.8

It was about the time
When the first beam of light touched the white peak
I saw it from the window of my travelers seat
I was a little sleepy my vision was quite hazy
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Paritosh Dhawan
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Tanmayi Mukundan 25 July 2012

Very well written! The way you have described it, one can picturise the beautiful scene.

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