Friday, March 17, 2017

The Paper Comments

Rating: 5.0

Because of a tiny imperfection,
I throw the paper away,
And realize,
We treat people the same way.
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Paul Michael
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Practicing Poetess 17 March 2017

This is amazingly good! Please continue to write, and may your star rise as rapidly as mine did (submitted my first poem on 3-13-2017, started off at Level 1 like you; now up to level 3 in four short days.) Let me help you along by giving you a 10 on this endeavour! Well done!

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