Tuesday, October 11, 2016

The Pending Storm Comments

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Today I went for a walk in bohemian Muizenberg,
Surfers corner was buzzing and full,
The riparian-blue ocean was cold as an iceberg,
I could feel the magnetic power of natures pull.
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MandyLynn Mott
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Chinedu Dike 11 October 2016

Beautiful narrative piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned in good poetic diction with conviction. An insightful depiction of a tumultuous sea elegantly brought forth. Thanks for sharing Mandy. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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Mandy-lynn Mott 12 October 2016

Thank you so much Chinedu. Will do!

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