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Rating: 3.8

My poem would eat nothing.
I tried giving it water
but it said no,

worrying me.
Day after day,
I held it up to the llight,

turning it over,
but it only pressed its lips

more tightly together.
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Soul Watcher 22 June 2016

I liked this poem and feel happy that I reached it

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Kay Staley 02 November 2015

How charmingly delusional. This is an interesting example of personification. I enjoyed reading this poem, but who can understand what the author wanted the reader to think when reading this?

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Douglas Scotney 02 November 2015

so give a sick poem air and it'll treat you unfair

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Susan Williams 02 November 2015

I think humor is the hardest write a writer can write right. Mr. Levis did it up in a wrapper of laughter and bows of giggles

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 November 2015

Problems are part of life. Nice work.

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John Richter 02 November 2015

This is very funny! Bravo!

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Allotey Abossey 02 November 2015

Excellent display of wits. Good work

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Oduro Bright Amoh 02 November 2015

Hahahaha. This is a brilliantly funny poem

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Ratnakar Mandlik 02 November 2015

Mind blowing poem. Very interesting write. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Seema Jayaraman 02 November 2015

awesome write, the poem an alter ego, the poet's inner feeling which never wanted to end things in the first place! ! thanks for sharing.

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