Friday, January 29, 2010

The Prison Has Forsaken Us Comments

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retorting all these lies
from all these wasted cries
can't stare into dying eyes
in life you learn to bleed
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Shay Lowery 29 January 2010

good use of rythm and words but it drags on and on. might want 2 revise it and cut it shorter.

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