The Rain Poem by Mark Ruiz

The Rain



I stood still as the rain came down on me.
The cold I let not wrong me for I see.
My own darkness in my eyes.
Let the cold bite atatck me all day.
The rain amplifies my voice, amplifies my pain.
I became so numb, but from what?
The rain or myself.
As the rain pours it floods and I'm drowning.
Deeper and deeper I fall, struggling.
I let go as I focused on reality then.
The hail hit me, untangling me from this web.
The rain though cloudy, wet and cold
Never lasts forever, or so I'm told.
I stood still as the rain came down on me.
The cold I let not wrong me for now I see.
It only bit to wake me from my sleep.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Tiong Chunghoo 16 March 2006

became so numb, but from what? The rain or myself. the poem is hidden here. express it!

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