Christopher Lacomba

Rookie (september 29th 1986 / rochester new york)

The Rain - Poem by Christopher Lacomba

i listen as the rain falls down,
wishing that i couldnt see this frown,
i sigh as the book touches my chest,
and wonder why i thought you where the best,
it was the simple things that i felt u do,
that i knew that it was to good to be true,
u broke my heart,
and left me alone,
to contemplate why,
why i was never enough,
to satisfy your love, so u turned away,
and fell into another........

Comments about The Rain by Christopher Lacomba

  • Lauren Harris (3/15/2007 4:04:00 PM)

    Everyone feels this way when they lose the one they really loved... I felt it when I lost you... (Report)Reply

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  • Andrew Castillo (1/9/2007 8:59:00 AM)

    hmm...i've felt the same way. well right now i do cuz i just got out of a relationship with my boyfrien where the possibility of him cheating on me were very high because i wouldn't satisfy his needs. we're always thinking why they do us wrong but after a while we can just view them as people who were lost. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 9, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 21, 2010

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