Saturday, July 12, 2008

The Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

It’s cleansing...
As it runs down my face, I feel renewed, cleaned, different...
As the others run for cover, I stay.
I look up to the sky as if trying to collect every dropp of water in my pores, like a bucket, or hole in the earth...
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Alyssa Wanii
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Jason Taylor 12 July 2008

i really like this i really love the rain to, it clears all there streets and the ending is really good to because when am in the rain i think of a person or people i care for the most.well done thanks

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Daedalus Labyrinth 12 July 2008

I too love the rain, and you do a great job of describing its sensation. I especially like the end where you give the poem a new perspective. Great job!

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