Neera Lollbeeharry

Freshman - 753 Points (Mauritius)

The Rape Of The Buds - Poem by Neera Lollbeeharry

Crimson petals strewn
on a carpet soft and green,
bleed in tears, silent.

A leafy awning
spreads its maternal embrace
to shield them from shame.

The buds are defiled
their full nudity exposed
to bold groping hands.

Heartless nature smiles
enjoying the ruination
of frail innocence.

Topic(s) of this poem: nature

Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is an assignment I got from a creative writing workshop. It describes the premature desecration of innocent buds under the impassive glance of nature.

Comments about The Rape Of The Buds by Neera Lollbeeharry

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (12/13/2015 1:52:00 AM)

    Heartless nature smiles
    enjoying the ruination
    of frail innocence. you have images in your brain that is so powerful to bring in themes which affect the reader.
    thank you. this is a great poem in simple words.. thank you. tony
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    Neera Lollbeeharry (12/13/2015 4:11:00 AM)

    well thank you, sir, for all the encouragement.

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 26, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 26, 2015

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