Georgia Hindmarch

Freshman - 828 Points (15/03/00)

The Relationship River - Poem by Georgia Hindmarch

A relationship should be
like a river,
Channelled and smooth sailing,
steady and strong.

Flowing in one direction,
Curves and edges planed,
Lush grassy green banks,
Emotions never feigned.

But no, not us.
We are the oncoming flood.

Ours is the River
during the storm.
Clashing.
Unpredictable.
Raging.
Destructive.

There is but one hope
As the water moves south,
Widening- widening thrice
Till the River meets its mouth.

Topic(s) of this poem: break up, breaking up, hope, love, nature, relationship, relationships, river, sad love, sadness


Comments about The Relationship River by Georgia Hindmarch

  • Nééraj Kumar (11/27/2016 10:29:00 AM)


    Tells a lot about how a relationship should be, liked it :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 1, 2016



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