Tuesday, November 8, 2011

The Right Wrongs Comments

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Entangled between all the right wrongs
Leaving for a journey that will go on
Can’t see the path ahead
Feeling as if I’m falling in a deep well.
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Prachi Agrawal
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Harindhar Reddy 10 November 2011

You have sprinkled adrenaline by azure poetic stanzas for ex: this one....... 'Taste of sugar It’s getting bitter And the state of mind Is getting unsound.' Hey poet, Life becomes bitter with bitter blows as age advances on us. You are still young. You will come across this fact again and again. Anyways Thumps up for the poet!

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