Sunday, December 4, 2016

The River Comments

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I am haunted by the river.
It courses through my veins,
washing all my thoughts and hopes away,
like yesterday's leaves and mud,
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Kim Barney 04 December 2016

Nice touch, to end the poem with same line as you started. Intriguing poem. This appears to be the first one that you have posted on this site, so welcome to Poem Hunter!

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Will Richards 04 December 2016

Thanks, it is my first on here. perhaps you might prefer intrigue, in which case, read no further! This memory was about a car crash into a river, with the poet being the sole survivor

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