velvety red petals
full and sweet
soft and light
arranged neat
beautiful symbol
of love, romantically
better symbol than thought
when thought logically
beautiful and sweet
it may be
but thorns and petals
both to see
thorns can cut deep
and hurt you
as you bleed
what to do?
beauty decietful
handled improperly
blood and hurt
rising to see
a symbol of love
beautiful
handled improperly
hurtful
I love your poem, it's so symbolic with a good writing keep the good work :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a very nice write...somewhere to the end the thread is lost in the metaphorical sense... overall very readable.... be happy :)