Tuesday, June 14, 2011

The Schizo Smack Misfit Tragedy Comments

Rating: 5.0

You have split and shattered
Fallen away
Your demons are comming
Arrive to tear you apart
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Rob Francis Parsons
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 14 June 2011

Incredibly well. Very strong sentiments. Great imagery. Fine poetics. I rated it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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Rob Francis Parsons

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