Friday, August 16, 2019

The " Self " Argument Comments

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And so, , ,
it came to pass
That Moment of discovery,
where, ,
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Roger Snow
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Bri Edwards 22 September 2019

I esp. like: " Out walks Self into the Gathering Storm, , Feeling far more Crazy, , a bit more, , , , , out of Norm, , , but in next line did you MEAN " Lighting" or " Lightning" ? Lightning will surely...light up the sky. the poem entertained me, but my insanity is of the wrong type for me to understand it. was i supposed to? Pic: i've heard of contortionists, but 'this takes the cake" . bri :)

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Roger Snow 23 September 2019

yes lightning, oops, typo, I'll attempt to sin no more, heh heh. ok, to understand it a bit, " Self " as well as " Self Delusion " , " Go " , " no One " are each a person/Character in the Song. it takes a bit to catch that, The style is purposed to cause the reader to say: " Stop, what? " then shake head and try again. When sung to a " High " Audience, so much fun to wATCH THEM.

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Roger Snow 23 September 2019

yes lightning, oops, typo, I'll attempt to sin no more, heh heh. ok, to understand it a bit, " Self " as well as " Self Delusion " , " Go " , " no One " are each a person/Character in the Song. it takes a bit to catch that, The style is purposed to cause the reader to say: " Stop, what? " then shake head and try again. When sung to a " High " Audience, so much fun to watch.

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