Friday, March 28, 2014

The Seven Minutes Comments

Rating: 4.0

He lay on his death bed,
His clothes dripping with red.
To help him, they're craving,
But alas! He's far beyond saving.
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Mohammad Abdullah
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 08 June 2014

Wow a most superb poem in great rhymin! U pieced the narrative poem well. Kudos. Nice to read u again.

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Mohammad Abdullah

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Al Khaitan, Kuwait
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