The Shadows Of My Past Comments

I found my sister in the hall, lying in a pool of blood.. A broken, bloodied vase near her head.. Not far from her lay my little brother, hugging his beloved toy.. Peacefully sleeping.. Only.. His throat had been brutally slit. such terrible scenes............ horrible..... is it true..... all these.... reading it made me sad beyond expression.... but u hve great power in you to contain it and write...... thank you dear poetess. thank you. tony