Thursday, June 23, 2011

The Shield Comments

Rating: 5.0

The first day I saw you, was the day
you picked me from the shelf of the Roman Armory
You where young timid and frail,
I made an oath that day,
I will be proud, I will be strong
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Marthinus Carstens
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 23 June 2011

Outstanding poem. Wonderfully conceived. Great imagery with nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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