The Silent Wind Poem by Dead Ducky

The Silent Wind



No one can hear it.
Only get blinded,
By the dust,
Blowing silently.
Choking on loose gravel.
No one can speak,
To warn the others,
About the,
Trecherous, deadly, toxic,
Silent wind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adam Hollingsworth 11 January 2009

I like the metaphors and the subjective descriptions. Good job.

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lol very true and somewhat dangerous, great humour

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