The Smiting Of Beth Sarim Poem by Noah Smits

The Smiting Of Beth Sarim



Day breaks at the daycare where men march in line,
at the dale ‘round the delta o' the blood-tinted stream.
Clouds loll periwinkle with haze of last morn,
the gunsmoke shot by parents, prideful eyes all agleam
has rose—to the stars with Nativity's shine
see the twinkle! see the twinkle! a babe has been born!

Midday and there's word of an exit from here,
a savior, a messiah, come in swaddling clothes.
Genius so beyond this mob mired in harms
has bequeathed august purpose, the likes none of them knows.
One man, made a father, erupts in a cheer:
just as promised! just as promised! a child in my arms!

Twilight, but the soldiers have yet to abate
the attacks. Though with caution each of that personnel
gives son, or gives daughter, his faith and aplomb.
The general bids his offspring a most tender farewell:
"My son, how I love thee, be off and be great."
hear the thunder! see the slaughter! the babe is a bomb!

Monday, March 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: baby,symbolic,war
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The soldiers bringing about their own destruction with their "messiah, " the bomb, is representative of all people who put their faith in the wrong things and watch those things show their true, ugly selves. Still, I try to portray the soldiers sympathetically, since they take the same leaps of faith that I do, just with the wrong subject. Beth Sarim is invoked as heretical; "smiting" is invoked as a harsh reaction from God, arguably an overreaction akin to the violence that ends this poem.
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