Wirehair Collie Poem by Noah Smits

Wirehair Collie

Rating: 5.0


A wind that blows in no direction whips
and scatters drifts of leaves. Each way you face,
it meets you there, reminds you nature is
a struggle. Lukewarm folks need not apply;
the strong are strengthened and the weaklings die—
but what of those who find their proper place

amid the fray, not in it? Hear the groan
of distant engines, taste the cookout air,
and smell the weed from neighbor's window blown.
Without you, all these things will still be there.

A spindly, sickly collie rushes by.
Objective, still, you are, a gawking gob
not intervening, feeling now your mind's
perspective floating toward the speeding car.
Your smoking neighbor left some door ajar—
as wheels and roads are left to do their job.

Become organic yet become machine,
retreat advancing, leaving on the shelf
the wanting I; then in some place between
the collie and the car, you find yourself.

Sunday, February 17, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: detachment,harmony,human condition,self discovery,dog
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A moment of witnessing something bad (in this case, a dog about to be hit by a car)and feeling detached from the severity of life so much that the only thing that matters is the nuances of the world itself. Ditching the "I" in our approach can present us with a kind of deep contentment, and frees us momentarily from the cruelty of existence as an evolutionary being. In my opinion, the capability of truly selfless thought is one of the great miraculous wonders of humanity.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 18 February 2019

A well crafted poem, Noah.....10++++++

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 February 2019

" the strong are strengthened and weaklings die" a great truth envisioned in a thought provoking write. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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