Sunday, July 5, 2015

The Stand-Over Man Comments

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He told me that once he’d killed someone,
A long, long time in the past,
He’d held him down and he’d used a gun,
I said I was just aghast.
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David Lewis Paget
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Douglas Scotney 06 July 2015

I shouldn't have but couldn't help smiling at 'It must have been Ted, ' she said.

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Kim Barney 05 July 2015

I wanted to vote this poem a ten, but can't find a button to vote on it!

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Kim Barney 05 July 2015

Wow, my friend, you have created a classic here. This rings so true, but I hope it didn't really happen and was just a creation of your vivid imagination. Extremely well done!

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David Lewis Paget

David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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