Wednesday, November 4, 2015

The Stars Comments

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I see the stars
Shining in the pale moonlight
I see the stars
Shimmering on the ocean sea
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Lyndsay Ayliffe
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Daniel Brick 22 December 2015

The first and last stanzas parallel each other in a very satisfying way. The parallel encloses the poem with a quiet confidence in things around you that the middle stanzas elaborate with a pleasing intimacy. Confidence and intimacy are the two feelings I take away. The line that I like best is: The stars are not shy tonight.

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