Sunday, July 2, 2006

The Storm Comments

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The lighting brings back memories.
The thunder shows my anger.
As the rain washes it away.
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Katherine Robbins
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William Jackson 03 July 2006

Cool. I like your use of parallelism and your use of metaphors. Excellent.

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