The Storm Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

The Storm

Rating: 4.2


It was painful for the trees
It was horrible for the dogs
It was unbearable for the chickens
It was terrible for the children

It was spectacular for the sun
It was breathtaking for the air
It was amazing for the sea
It was awesome for the earth

It was a sign for many lives
It was a signifier for many truths
It was a signified for many virtues
It was always a symbol for calamity

It sometimes brews in cups
It sometimes crosses coasts
It sometimes weakens in oceans
It sometimes centers in minds

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chandra Marathe 29 June 2009

That is so true. And you have expressed it so well.

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Siddartha Montik 21 November 2016

You very clearly expressed what a Storm means to different things in this Nature of Life and on Earth and to Earth! Thank you for inviting!

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Siddartha Montik 21 November 2016

The pain and agony of living things, the Joy of Nature and Earth and surely signals many a virtues and in all sizes and shapes! Well Penned Sadhika! It sometimes brews in cups It sometimes crosses coasts It sometimes weakens in oceans It sometimes centers in minds .. the last Line is so true and Perfect! .. Beautiful Poem!

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Sherri Coulter 20 September 2009

sorrow for the children, chickens, dogs and trees. sun air sea earth always spectacular, breathtaking and amazingly awesome. signs and signifiers always a symbol for lives truths and many virtues of calamity. last stanza, a definite m&m moment.10/10 Thank you

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 August 2009

It sometimes brews in cups It sometimes crosses coasts It sometimes weakens in oceans It sometimes centers in minds thestorm is after all stroms only. it may come from any quarter... beautifule one

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Eyan Desir 01 July 2009

Interesting write........

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