The Suitcase Poem by J.M. Nixon

The Suitcase

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A heavy suitcase is crammed inside me.
Packed full.
Sealed tight.
It weighs me down.
I drag it along wherever I go.
I cannot manage the load.
No one helps me.
I am leaving the suitcase at your door.
You are strong.
Please carry it for me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Apothecary Montague 17 September 2009

Wow, wow, wow....brilliant. The title, perfect. Words perfect. The flow, wow the flow, as far as i am concerned, its all about flow and this would be poetry, even if you took all the words away..... this one is going into the vault.

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Blue Eyes 13 September 2009

i like the metaphors u used.they are used brilliantly.

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