Saturday, February 7, 2015

The Sunrise Comments

Rating: 5.0

The night's darkness dwindles

And the sky above the eastern horizon
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vasudevan Desikachari
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Roseann Shawiak 04 August 2015

Beautiful imagery, could feel myself standing there watching the sun come up, seeing the colors of the sky. Please watch your punctuation a little closer, sentences seem to run together. Otherwise, a truly great poem! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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