Monday, December 4, 2017

The Terrible Fate Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was ingress to the path of devils
With desert repleted by evils
My nub cluttered up with fears
I run helter skelter in tears
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Ahmad Abdullahi Dambam
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fatima umar mustapha 16 December 2017

flawless I am wanting more. keep it up

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fatima umar mustapha 16 December 2017

flawless I am wanting more. keep it up

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Gajanan Mishra 04 December 2017

feeling comfortable, beautiful, go on

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 December 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Ahmad A. D. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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