Friday, September 13, 2013

The Thief Of Class 7 Comments

Rating: 4.3

She was a thief
with large and busty hip
seeing whom, my heart began to slip
and, i adjusted it by appying a clip
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Vishal Sharma
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Vivian Nguyen 13 September 2013

Nice; cool rhymes. But I suggest that you have more eye to your grammar, which has issues.

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