Friday, January 2, 2015

The Third Wheel Comments

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I'm only a third wheel,
Pushed to the back just like a rotten meal.
No one seems to notice the real pain,
But inside you feel like you're going insane.
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Branton Wilcox
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Chinedu Dike 02 January 2015

A nice poem with lovely rhymes. It's deplorable what some people go through on regular bases in other to survive. Exploitation is very rife today because of the quest by humanity for material things. But be that as it may, FAITH KEEPS THOSE THAT KEEP THE FAITH - Mother Teresa. A well articulated poem penned with insight to capture the poet's conviction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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